The Vista

4 07 2007

The veil of mist lifted

for a moment,

just long enough

to see what lies beyond.

And this is what I saw,

just this,

over there,

between the poppies and the stream,

hidden behind the hawthorn tree,

with the wide blue sky

arcing above all

and the spring green grass

growing tall and wild:

A portal opened

and spread out before me

were realms unknown –

always to be so

to any too afraid

to venture on.

But I, the Warrior Goddess,

take my fears

and place them firmly

in front of me

staring them down

with black eyes,

and walk on.

(Soul Sister)


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7 responses to “The Vista”

4 07 2007
quinncreative (22:14:15) :

I am catching my breath, this is so beautiful. A real call to stride toward our fears.

4 07 2007
shewolfy728 (22:25:17) :

The images this calls to mind are beautiful.

4 07 2007
jan2 (23:52:08) :

Striking! Combative. A really impressive piece.

5 07 2007
Heather Blakey (01:06:35) :

ooh Edith! Expect to find this appearing in the Catalogue darling. This is so powerful Warrior Goddess. I will have to draw you all decked out in armour, ready to go.

5 07 2007
imogen88 (11:21:07) :

This is really powerful!

5 07 2007
peacebird (15:41:10) :

Wow - this is very a powerful message written with such clear imagery. Thank you.

5 07 2007
lorigloyd (23:24:07) :

The last line has so much punch and is a marvelous juxtaposition to the gentle imagery of the flowers and stream. This is one of your best poems.

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